miter's sprites

hey im a new spriter and here is my first sprites

notice that if you hadnt play aj the next sprite may spoil you

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the next one i made for greeny's ninja prosecutor

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and now for my first oc!

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theres a new prosecutor in town...

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Oh hayyy miter!
I've seen you on CR XD
Nice to see you here.
I still like the hobo hahah.

And the pirate is looking awesome so far =D

thanks!

Hobosparky is creeeepy.... >_>

But good. Very good.

hey guys i need your consulting, should i add a mustache to phoenix pirate?

i need to know...

Lol, not really a mustache, but maybe some stubble =D
That would be pirate-y XD

im on it!

update! my first oc, and im uploading it before i upload it to cr so enjoy this exclusive for a while sprite, sprite sheet is currently in process

Hey it's not bad for your first OC!

The hair is a little strange, but I suppose you will be working on it =]
Nice job

xD It looks nice.
Just make his hair a bit more anti-flat. =]

you mean shading? i did but you cant see it beacause its tiny

say can you give me tips how to do hair? i made it from scratch and as you can see im not so good at it so if you can give tips about it it will really help me

ok so i see afew problems first of all the head is weird not the hair...but the head in general...looks alittle deformed...i suggest spacing out the top abit more...next shading is weird...soory cant really explain things well...anyways go to my spritepage and look at my oc's hair shading that might help for the hair style your doing...but honestly that style is hard to sprite do to changing positions so i myself have changed to a simpler hair style

but for a begginer its good...although if you really wanna get better i personally think its best to start small...like with pw sprites instead of aj sprites because the pw sprites have less shades making it easier to make

sorry for how long that was...anyways keep at it

yea i noticed its easier to edit pw sprites, but i still love editing the aj one

hey i just wanted to thank everyone for the helping replies, i also made a little change for the hair

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please tell me if there anything i need to fix so i could work on the sprites, and also thank you cold, for your tips and i will also change the heads position

Hmm, it's really hard to tell because it isn't on the head >.>
And that's kind of a difficult hair style to make right in sprite form.

dont worry the last version(this is not the last version) will be the simpliest

update! theres a new prosecutor in town...